Very "Herbert Wells-ish for you" continues on.
-0.5 star: I had hard time adjusting to switched POV - for whatever reason.
-0.5 star: Everybody is wounded or sick (or sick in the head) or incapacitated in one way or another, with implants or mods or vertigo from hell. I felt dizzy myself quite a few times @.@
But - no matter :) I liked the story.